Friday, 18 March 2016

LyiSorn Edit Practice

Once upon there was a dragon named Zack he was playing in the forest with his brother. Then another dragon came along what are you two playing he asked, “we are playing knights the brothers replied do you want to play to”.

Narrative Pirate

Once upon a time there lived a pirate named Captain Jack. He sailed the seven seas with his crew in a ship called Bucky. He like to wear an eyepatch, and a Sword on his back.

One day Captain Jack went with his crew they were sailing and they came across an island. Captain Jack thought to himself. “There must be hidden treasure somewhere”. Captain Jack said to crew “go find the treasure”. That was the hidden treasure on Never land Island.



They searching and searching and search, all of the island but the treasure was hidden behind the two palm trees. One of this crew saw a the palm trees and there was a button and he press on it, the crew came to have a look what he was up to. The crew shouted  to Captain Jack “Come here and see the treasure there was a lots and lots of treasures!” So the Captain come over where was the crew. “ Wow that is the lots of treasure! Who founded”  Said the crew “It was him your crew sir”  “let's take all of the treasure” The Captain and all of his crew want to the ship of all of the treasure until it empty in the secret place. And they live happily ever after. The End!!!!!.   

Tuesday, 15 March 2016

Monday, 14 March 2016

All About Me

Dictagloss


Captain Morgan Anise was a tarts a pirate beat on a made him cross the seven seas with an enemy of he beauty in planer    

Friday, 11 March 2016

Riding to Craggy Rock


Mitch and Ben rode with their bikes to Craggy Rock. They needed lots of water to drink because it was a hot day. At the top of the hill there was a look-out. They stopped to have a drink of water.There was a storm coming. It started raining and they stopped to find shelter. Thunder  and lightning flashed. Mum said to move away from the big tree. They lied down on the grass until the storm stopped. They went back to the cabin because they were all wet. Mitch saw that the tree was all black and looked burnt.

The Disappear

 Once there was a boy called Troy he live with his family, three brothers and two sister. He went for a walk in the forest and his brothers come too. And they went with him too. And one brother saw a mysteriously man walking part. He said let go back home now, but the other brothers was walked in the forest. Troy saw the man too and said you are right let's go back now and go talk to mum and dad what we saw please let just go home. You guys stop let there is nothing to be worried about ok so let's just keep walking. We a going home and suddenly some of the tree was gone and some animal was gone too. What happening said one of his brother? So he ran to mum and dad and Troy too. The other brother saw the man too they got       

The Ake Word Family

Cat At The Beach

It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.


“Why the long face?” asked Johnson. Byron said “Because I want to get some food and the dog come I ran as fast as I can”. “After all the running I got tired and hungry I can’t go back there I said to myself dog is there.”  “I went home and I saw my grandma died I stop and I went running and cry”

Monday, 7 March 2016

Dictagloss

Zack was existed but also quantis. What was a knight shining doing out in the middle of the forest. It a lone wanting to play with dragon. Didn't he know that they were enemies       

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