Tuesday, 22 November 2016

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when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush

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When it was our last day camping out in the bush. My friends and I discovered that has a bush that was really rare. Because there wasn’t that much bushes to see around and because it was actually a huge forest that looks so amazing. It had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside also it looked just like a stinky old bush.

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